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托福写作满分范文点评:为何参加危险运动

[摘要]托福写作满分范文点评:为何参加危险运动?在托福写作备考中,考生就要开始注重词汇和短语的积累,平时可以多看看一些满分范文来提升自己的写作水平,那么接下来就跟着小编来看看本文托福写作满分范文吧。

  托福写作满分范文点评:为何参加危险运动?在托福写作备考中,考生就要开始注重词汇和短语的积累,平时可以多看看一些满分范文来提升自己的写作水平,那么接下来就跟着小编来看看本文托福写作满分范文吧。




  托福写作难点话题一览

  The attractions of dangerous activities

  Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  写作思路展开结构分析

  这道题目可能不太好展开,危险运动的定义可能很多同学都不是特别清楚,大家不妨按照极限运动来进行联想,就是那种对人身安全可能有危险性,非常规性质的运动项目,比如跳伞蹦极之类的运动。而这类运动能够吸引人参加,原因多半是体验刺激、金钱利益之类的因素,大家可以从这些点着手论述。

  本话题高分范文赏析

  People engage themselves in dangerous activities for various reasons, which probably includes money, pleasure, and perhaps ironically, nescience. Perhaps the most direct drive might come from money, which is needed for everyone, any time and everywhere. People have enough wit to balance their certain choices, especially when they fa danger and money. Those stunt men or women in Hollywood movies, photographers who shoot sharks or crocodiles, or those who participate in stock car racing, are always sophisticated enough calculate whether the outcome overweigh the risk. If they are willing to take the risk, they must have evaluated well. They know exactly the rule: the more risks they take, the more they might get. There also is another kind of people in this world. Money is of almost no importance to them They perform dangerous activities just for their own pleasure. Perhaps the most appropriate example involves sports. Actually every kind of sports is dangerous, and even can be deadly. Danger always exists, but people tend to simply ignore it. Take parachuting for example, who can refuse the fascination of flying in the sky like a bird? On the other hand, it seems that danger itself makes the activity so fascinating as too hard to refuse. To conquer is the very nature of human being from the very beginning. Pheidippides said seconds before dropping dead two thousand years ago, "Rejoice,] we conquer!" And it seems perfectly logical for some people that celebration follows conquer. Ironically, sometimes blind brave comes out of nescience. Sometimes people simply don't know the activity is hazardous or how perilous it exactly is. It can be exemplified by a recent incident. Five students (three of them have a master's degree) lost their lives in a mountaineering expedition. Those students reportedly didn't, and it seems highly probable, make an adequate preparation before expedition, which made the tragedy ineluctable. People always praise alpinists with words such as strong, brave, courageous, but in this case none of these words is appropriate Those young students traded their springtime with blind brave, and died in vain.

  以上就是关于“托福写作满分范文点评:为何参加危险运动?”的相关内容,希望以上内容能对大家的托福写作提升有所帮助!最后,小编预祝各位考生早日考试成功!

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