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托福写作满分范文点评:开在社区里的大商场

[摘要]托福写作满分范文点评:开在社区里的大商场,在托福写作考试中,考生经常容易因为遇到自己没遇到过的话题影响自己的考试进度,那么考生就有必要在备考的时候多看一些高分范文来提升自己,那么接下来就来看看本文中的托福满分范文吧。

  托福写作满分范文点评:开在社区里的大商场,在托福写作考试中,考生经常容易因为遇到自己没遇到过的话题影响自己的考试进度,那么考生就有必要在备考的时候多看一些高分范文来提升自己,那么接下来就来看看本文中的托福满分范文吧。




  托福写作难点话题一览

  Do you like a large shopping center being built in your neighborhood?

  It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

  写作思路展开结构分析

  这道题目的关键点有两个,分别是large以及in your neighborhood,既然是开在社区里的大商场,那么势必会带来商业繁荣的影响,往好了说以后自己买东西会更方便,社区会更热闹更有活力。往不好的方向展开则可以说社区的安静气氛会受影响变得更加吵闹,同时安全性以及交通出行方面也可能会受到影响。大家喜不喜欢都可以找到展开的点。

  本话题高分范文赏析

  While the proponents of the plan to build a large shopping center in my community believe that it will aid economic development, I think that it will possibly do irreparable harm to our neighborhood. The proposed shopping center will damage existing businesses, provide inferior products, and destroy the environment of our peaceful community.

  Research indicates that companies with less than 50 workers employ more people and generate more revenue as a percentage of a nation's GDP than large-scale corporations. This is true in America, where small businesses are considered the engine of the economy, as it is in our community where many people own and operate small shops. Large stores can buy large quantities of goods at wholesale prices. While local grocery, that cannot buy products in bulk, will be unable to compete. Once the competition is gone, the large store can raise its prices and lower its employee's wages. This classic example of exploitative monopoly capitalism impoverishes a community while enriching a small number of people.

  The goods sold at the shopping center would be mass produced and necessarily of inferior quality to the handcrafted local goods and freshly grown local produce. Cheap products like plastic furniture would lack the character and local flavor of traditional wooden furniture made right here in our town. Cheaply mass-produced food,laden with pesticides and chemical preservatives, would crowd out the healthier, fresher, and tastier local produce on the shelves of the large shopping center. Low prices from the large store might tempt local consumers to eat less healthy food, endangering the health of local people as well as harming the incomes of local farmers and shopkeepers.

  Lastly, I must point out that a large shopping center might bring unwelcome development to our small community. Ugly and noisy roads and parking lots would need to be constructed. The volume of people wanting to buy things at the new shopping center would worsen the traffic situation, which is already bad. Pollution from cars and trucks already has a notably degrading effect on the local air-quality and this is also bound to become worse as the traffic to and from the shopping center increases.

  以上就是关于“托福写作满分范文点评:开在社区里的大商场”的相关内容,希望以上内容能对大家的托福写作提升有所帮助!最后,小编预祝各位考生早日考试成功!

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