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托福写作有哪些常见的病句(一)?

[摘要] 托福写作有哪些常见的病句?我们的写作部分想要拿高分就需要我们注重文章的语法、语句。今天小编给大家整理了一些写作中常见的病句,你是否也出现这样的错误呢?感兴趣的童鞋可以和小编一起来看看吧!

  托福写作有哪些常见的病句?我们的写作部分想要拿高分就需要我们注重文章的语法、语句。今天小编给大家整理了一些写作中常见的病句,你是否也出现这样的错误呢?感兴趣的童鞋可以和小编一起来看看吧!


托福写作有哪些常见的病句(一)?


  1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

  改进:Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.

  2. For example, you work in a big factory.

  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

  3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

  改进:You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

  6. Their brain is still very young.

  改进: They are still immature.

  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

  8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

  以上就是小编今天要和大家分享的“托福写作有哪些常见的病句”,希望以上内容能够帮助到大家,想要了解更多精彩资讯的童鞋可以关注朗阁网校哦~

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