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怎样高效利用雅思写作范文?

[摘要] 怎样高效利用雅思写作范文?相信对雅思比较了解的同学都知道,写作考试的时间比较短,很多同学都不能在规定的时间里面完成。如果想要在短时间里面进步自己的写作能力,写作的范文就是必不可少的。

  怎样高效利用雅思写作范文?相信对雅思比较了解的同学都知道,写作考试的时间比较短,很多同学都不能在规定的时间里面完成。如果想要在短时间里面进步自己的写作能力,写作的范文就是必不可少的。


怎样高效利用雅思写作范文?


  题干如下:

  Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

  *步:仔细审题,列出自己的写作提纲。如:

  Para 1: 背景知识+题目改写+表达观点

  Para 2: 同意/不同意的原因(以不同意为例)

  ①进步油价的办法只对少部分的穷人有效,因为富人不在乎多出的油价,他们仍旧会继续使用私家车。

  Para 3: 其它有效的方法

  ①鼓励人们使用公共交通

  ②建造更多更宽的路

  Para 4:总结

  第二步:通读范文,总结文章的提纲,与自己的版本进行核对。如:

  Para 1:引出话题+表达观点

  Para 2:不同意的原因

  ①油价进步不能长远地抑制私家车的数量。

  ②油价的进步也会影响私家车的数量,因此这个方法会很不受欢迎。

  Para 3:解决污染的有效方法:开发新能源+说服制造商和出行者生产和使用清洁能源驱动的车

  Para 4:解决交通堵塞的有效方法:改善可供出行者使用的公共交通服务(建立和维护足够的轻轨和地铁系统+使长途列车和汽车更具吸引力)

  Para 5:总结

  对比后,可积累范文提纲中不同意的原因②,且会发现自己的提纲中未包含解决污染问题的方法,可进行改进。

  第三步:精读范文,积累好词(同意替换+其他表达)并背诵,如:

  increasing the price of petrol=a rise in the price of petrol=higher fuel costs

  be likely to do sth. 很有可能做某事

  affect v. 影响

  public transport 公共交通

  implement v. 实施

  have a huge effect on 对……有巨大的影响

  tackle v. 解决

  ……

  第四步:精读范文,积累好句+背诵

  There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问的是

  It is undeniable that+句子 不可否认的是

  As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. (as引导原因状语从句)

  ……

  第五步:复述*文(可偶尔借助中文翻译)

  C8T3T2 Model Answer

  There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

  While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that would be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.

  I think to tackle the problem of pollution; cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.

  However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.

  In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.

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