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到底如何写出*开头?开头段越长越好吗?如何写开头背景句?题干该如何改写?开头段到底要不要发表观点?下面我们就来看一下雅思写作哪些开头是拿不了*的?
中式英语
讨厌指数:★★★★★
上榜理由:用中式英文开头,不仅会让*看不懂,还暴露了你的语言功底,语料积累匮乏,是雅思写作中的大忌。
比如:
写作主题 :The happiest moment in your life.
案例:In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
语法错误不断
讨厌指数:★★★
上榜理由:涉及到雅思写作评分标准中的语法多样性和准确性,语法错误不断自然会成为扣分点。
比如:
写作主题:If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
案例:About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.
超级啰嗦
讨厌指数:★★★★
上榜理由:开篇就要主题明了清晰,上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清,*自然认为你的观点模糊,甚至不会表达。
比如:
写作主题 :Should college students be allowed to get married?
案例:This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
观点不明朗
讨厌指数:★★★
上榜理由:雅思大作文很重要的一点就是你的逻辑性和观点,如果观点都不明确,后面的举例*等都会缺乏说服力,自然分数也不会高。
比如:
写作主题:Should college students be allowed to get married?
案例:I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
与题目有关,但没有出现关键词,也不能认为对。
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