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雅思范文项目分数及写作技巧

[摘要] 学习雅思范文的写作技巧,掌握雅思作文的评分规则,让你雅思写作不再头疼

  学习雅思范文的写作技巧,掌握雅思作文的评分规则,让你雅思写作不再头疼。

  题目:Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

  在当今世界吸烟是一个导致严重的疾病和死亡的主要原因。在公众健康的利益,政府应该禁止香烟和其他烟草产品。你同意或不同意吗?

  雅思范文:There are widely differing views on the issue of whether tobacco should be banned or not. Some people would suggest that it is their right to smoke and that prohibiting cigarettes would be a violation of their civil liberties; however, I personally believe that tobacco should indeed be made illegal. There are two principal reasons for this.

  One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that tobacco is a drug. The majority of governments around the world take a prohibitionist approach to the problem of substance abuse. If governments wish to be consistent in pursuing their “war on drugs”, therefore, I believe they must ban tobacco as well.

  However, perhaps the strongest argument in favor of banning cigarettes and other tobacco products is that of public health. It is an irrefutable fact that smoking leads to lung cancer and other such potentially fatal diseases. Pro-smoking groups would no doubt argue that each individual has the right to determine what goes into his/her own body. Nevertheless, I would suggest that the interests and rights of society at large must override those of the individual. The medical treatment that smokers require is often incredibly costly, and it is frequently governments and society that cover these costs rather than the individual smoker. Hence, I feel that laws prohibiting smoking would be entirely justified.

  In reality, of course, the widespread prohibition of smoking is unlikely in the near future. However, given the seriousness of the problems that it causes, I believe that this should be the ultimate goal.

  当今世界吸烟是导致严重的疾病和死亡遍及的一大原因。在公共卫生的利益前,政府应该禁止香烟和其他烟草产品。你同意还是不同意?》》点击进入测试小课堂

  有关于烟草是否应禁止或不是问题广泛不同的看法。有些人会认为吸烟这是他们的权利,禁止香烟将是侵犯了他们的公民自由;不过,我个人认为,烟草确实应定为非法。这有两个主要理由。

雅思范文项目分数及写作技巧

  我认为关键一点的是,烟草是一种药物。一方面我认为烟草是一种药物。(如今)世界上的大部分政府都采取了禁令来防止药物滥用这个问题的发生。如果政府希望始终如一地追求他们的“毒品战争”因此,我相信他们必须禁止烟草为好。

  然而,也许在赞成禁止香烟和其他烟草产品的强有力的论据是,公众健康。这是一个不争的事实,吸烟会导致肺癌和其他此类潜在的致命疾病。吸烟群体无疑会争辩说,每个人都有权决定什么进入他/她自己的身体的权利。不过,我建议广大利益和社会权利必须覆盖这些个人的利益。吸烟者需要药物治疗往往是令人难以置信的昂贵,而且常常是政府和社会的支付这些费用,而不是个别吸烟者。因此,我觉得法律禁止吸烟会完全合理的。

  在现实中,当然,吸烟的广泛禁止是不太可能在不久的将来。但是,鉴于它会导致问题的严重性,我认为,这应该是目标。

  对于考官来说,雅思写作是按照项目打分的。写作时考生需要考虑到以下几点:

  第一、有明确的观点,有有力的论据,并且利用各类论据进行富有逻辑性的论证。

  第二、作文的框架结构合理。不同的提问方式,需要采用不同的框架结构来应对。及时是相同的题目和提问方式,也可以采取更加富有逻辑性和条理性的逻辑结构来进行论证。

  第三、段落结构合理。段落与段落之间,句子与句子之间有流畅的衔接和连贯。

  第四、语法正确,用词地道,句法复杂多变。

  一旦符合如上的四个标准,雅思写作获得高分,便是水到渠成的事情了。》》点我领取在线免费试听课程

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