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万事开头难——雅思作文怎么开头?

[摘要]

    俗话说,万事开头难,好的开端是成功的一半。那么现在问题来了,作文开头到底怎么写?下面小编就为大家一一介绍一下,和小编一起来看看吧!


万事开头难——雅思作文怎么开头?


  常见误区

  (为了说明问题,里面的举例可能比较夸张,但是大家不要光顾着笑,也要反思下自己是不是或多或少也有这样的问题哦~)

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头一:中式英文

  典型失败案例:

  Topic 1: The happiest moment in your life

  In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily...

  Topic 2: The population problem

  The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

  Topic 3: Is there fairness in today’s business world?

  I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things...

  Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person

  Being a niceperson have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get 'baoying'.

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头二:废话连篇

  典型失败案例:

  Topic 1: Should college students be allowed to get married?

  This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married...

  修改方案:开门见山直奔主题

  In my opinion,it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

  Topic 2: Will modern technology, such as the Internet,ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

  Ok, this topic isa very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

  Topic 3: The importance of environmental protection

  Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头三:观点模糊

  典型失败案例:

  Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?

  I think this topicis very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married,so this topic is very difficult for me...

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头四:偏离主题

  典型失败案例:

  Topic: It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

  I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools,and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头五:语法错误

  典型失败案例:

  Topic: If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

  About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头六:过分简单

  典型失败案例:

  Topic: The importance of environmental protection

  This issue issurely very important, let’s talk about it!

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头七:用词不当

  典型失败案例:

  Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?

  I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头八:意思重复

  典型失败案例:

  Topic: Your opinion on DINK families

  My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头九:观点武断

  典型失败案例:

  Topic 1: The importance of confidence

  In my opinion,confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful peoplein the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

  Topic 2: The solution to the traffic problem

  I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be not raffic problem any more.

  ◆需规避雅思写作开头十:中国俗语(不是说不可以用,而是因为很多烤鸭使用的时候都会不自觉的用中式英语 让考官不知所云)

  典型失败案例:

  Topic 1: Is it good to have a large family?

  I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: 'Many sons,many lucks'...

  正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children

  Topic 2: Should we pretend to know everything or admitour ignorance?

  We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: 'Know is know, don’t know is don’t know'...

  Topic 3: Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole...

  Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person

  I believe one sentence: 'A good person is all life safe'. We Chinese people always say: 'Good has good pay, bad has bad pay'. <<点击进入测试小课堂

  开头到底怎么写

  要素一:现象句

  雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。

  E.g.1

  Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

  It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

  套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount of

  E.g.2

  Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

  What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

  In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

  主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school.

  同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven.

  E.g.3

  In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

  It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

  主被动之间的转换,以及同义替换:finish high school = graduate from high school.

  所以,从上文中可以看出,一般来说,现象句会在最开始加上一个套句,并且加上地点和时间。

  雅思大作文开头段经典套句:

  1.It is true that......是真实的

  2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…

  3.It is quite common… …是常见的

  4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的

  5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的

  6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的

  地点:in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place

  时间:in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

  要素二:点到问题

  雅思大作文考题分成两种:report & argumentative.

  对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

  E.g.4

  In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

  What do you think are the cause of this?

  What solutions can you suggest?

  Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

  点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来,全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。

  E.g.5

  Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

  Why is it difficult to define?

  What factors are important in achieving happiness?

  Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

  点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点,把造成这个现象的原因大致导出,与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。 <<点击进入在线测试平台

  对于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion.; is it a positive or negative development?),这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点,所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。

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