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雅思作文如何写得简洁?(一)

[摘要] 雅思作文如何写得简洁?有的考生觉得雅思作文字数写的越多越好,其实这是一个错误的观念。雅思作文需要我们用简洁的语言表达详细的内容。接下来就让小编来为你介绍如何做到这一点吧!

  雅思作文如何写得简洁?有的考生觉得雅思作文字数写的越多越好,其实这是一个错误的观念。雅思作文需要我们用简洁的语言表达详细的内容。接下来就让小编来为你介绍如何做到这一点吧!


雅思作文如何写得简洁?(一)


  建议一:避免空洞的单词和词组

  1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。

  比如:When all things are considered, young adults of today live moresatisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

  这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

  Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

  2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换

  例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to helptheir parents, they did not have the options that young people have at thispoint in time.

  “due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did nothave the options that young people have now.

  建议二:避免重复

  1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。

  例如下面这个例子:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

  large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:

  The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

  更简洁的表达方式为:

  My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

  2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换

  例如:My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on hisparents' farm.

  这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:

  My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents'farm.

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