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修复雅思作文失败开头的方法(一)

[摘要] 雅思作文开头很重要,但失败的开头会直接影响雅思作文的得分。今天小编即将要分享给大家的是“修复雅思作文失败开头的方法(一)”,希望小编整理出来的这篇文章能够对大家有所帮助!有兴趣的小伙伴赶快和小编一起来看一下吧!

  雅思作文开头很重要,但失败的开头会直接影响雅思作文的得分。今天小编即将要分享给大家的是“修复雅思作文失败开头的方法(一)”,希望小编整理出来的这篇文章能够对大家有所帮助!有兴趣的小伙伴赶快和小编一起来看一下吧!


修复雅思作文失败开头的方法(一)


  典型失败案例一:

  Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about thistopic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

  修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题

  n my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students toget married。

  Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

  Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I havea friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet toread news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and moreimportant in our daily life.

  Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

  Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s reallyvery very important!

  “见官死”开头之二:中式英文人见人晕

  典型失败案例:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

  In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart floweropened angrily……

  Topic 2- The population problem

  The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

  I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. Forexample, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

  Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he will get “baoying”.

  “见官死”开头之三:观点模糊态度暧昧

  典型失败案例: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

  “见官死”开头之四:偏离主题无轨电车

  典型失败案例:Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire thequalifications and quality essential to success through university education. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

  I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

  “见官死”开头之五:语法错误惨不忍睹

  典型失败案例:Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

  About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents too besides children is also should.

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