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考官讨厌的雅思写作开头(二)

[摘要] 为什么用了好多华丽辞藻仍是万年5.5?很有一种可能就是你的开头就让雅思考官看了就毫无阅读欲望、愤然扣分!今天就让小编带你看看雅思考官讨厌的十种作文开头吧!

  为什么用了好多华丽辞藻仍是万年5.5?很有一种可能就是你的开头就让雅思考官看了就毫无阅读欲望、愤然扣分!今天就让小编带你看看雅思考官讨厌的十种作文开头吧!


考官讨厌的雅思写作开头(二)


  六、语法错误不断

  讨厌指数:★★★☆☆

  上榜理由:涉及到雅思写作评分标准中的语法多样性和准确性,语法错误不断自然会成为扣分点。

  比如:

  写作主题:If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished?

  案例:About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

  七、意思重复

  讨厌指数:★★★☆☆

  上榜理由:反复重复一个意思,让考官会觉得你并没有什么可以表达的,或者词汇表达能力有限,自然也会扣分。

  比如:

  写作主题:Your opinion on DINK families

  案例:My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

  八、观点绝对化

  讨厌指数:★★★☆☆

  上榜理由:考生在使用语言描述事物或者表达自己的观点时,应尽可能避免语言过于绝对化,更应该注意该语言中非绝对化表达方式的学习,这样才能尽显文章内容的客观性。

  比如:

  写作主题 1:The importance of confidence

  案例:In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

  写作主题 2:The solution to the traffic problem

  案例:I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

  九、内容过分简单

  讨厌指数:★★☆☆☆

  上榜理由:考官想给你打分都没有内容,所以切记尽量丰富内容,尤其不要照搬题目。

  比如:

  写作主题:The importance of environmental protection

  案例:This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

  十、用词不当

  讨厌指数:★★☆☆☆

  上榜理由:用词不当会暴露你的词汇,而且评分标准中谈到“在不同的语境中,使用正确的词性;”所以在使用词汇的时候,正确性也是非常重要的。如果想要取得更高的分数,那么词汇的多样性也要更多的纳入考虑。切记,不要用口语化的表达!

  比如:

  写作主题 1:The importance of confidence

  案例:In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

  写作主题 2:The solution to the traffic problem

  案例:I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

  以上就是有关”考官讨厌的雅思写作开头“的相关内容,希望能够给你带来帮助,小编预祝大家早日通过雅思考试!

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