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雅思写作范文与解析

[摘要] 众所周知,雅思写作有四个评分标准,Lexicalresources是其中*容易被人忽略的一个。词汇量不大的学生不能获得好成绩。这是怎么回事呢?有没有什么方法可以改变这种状况呢?办法还是有的,小编为大家总结了一下,一起来看看!

众所周知,雅思写作有四个评分标准,Lexicalresources是其中*容易被人忽略的一个。词汇量不大的学生不能获得好成绩。这是怎么回事呢?有没有什么方法可以改变这种状况呢?办法还是有的,小编为大家总结了一下,一起来看看!
*种是缺乏多样性。造成这种情况的主要原因是一些同学疏于扩大词汇量,认为雅思作文的用词只需自然、准确,这实际上是走向了一种“极简”的极端。当然,词汇量很重要,但是如果你不断地重复单词,特别是那些在题目中不断重复的单词,词汇量就不会很高。
二是精确度不够。这种学生背诵了很多单词,一到考场就把它们堆叠起来。而忽略了具体应用上的细节,如词汇在语境中的运用,搭配是否正确,词性使用是否得当等。在第二种情况下,词汇量*多6个,不会再高了。
要想准确地运用词汇,就必须了解每一个词的拼写、词义、语域、内涵含义、语法形态、搭配等,工作量才会非常繁重。不仅仅是那些处于备考阶段的同学,包括我们整个英语教学,都在不断地重语法轻词汇,这一偏差这些年才慢慢地被纠正过来。
下面给大家分享一篇范文,大家可以参考一下:
【20191107大陆】In some cultures it is argued that the old age should be valued, while in some cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
应该更重视老年人还是年轻人,其实就是谁对社会更有用的问题。我在本文中采取的观点是中立的,认为老年人和年轻人都值得重视。因为老年人也曾经年轻过,而且还能发挥余热。

Different cultures and different stages of development value different age groups. Some prefer the younger population as they constitute the main labor force, while others attach more importance to the senior group, regarding them with more experience. I think equal attention should be paid to both groups, as they can serve society in their own ways.

In a society that values experience, the elderly enjoy a higher prestige and often occupy important social positions. For example, an agricultural society often relies on the older adults’ experience, since they can tell when to seed, how to battle extreme weather conditions, and deal with insect attack. Such life-based knowledge is hard to acquire from books or the Internet, and may only come into use rarely, making the middle-aged unable to deal with such extraordinary cases.

However, modern societies with rapid economic growth often tend to value the young generation, who can serve as the labour force. For them, people above retirement age are unproductive consumers of government benefits. The pension they collect each month, as well as the number of caregivers they require impose a huge burden on the economy. The youngsters, on the other hand, can work to provide products and services needed by the society, pay taxes to the government, and often consume more than the elderly, which also contributes to the economic viability.

In my opinion, both young and elderly people should be appreciated, for the older generation has once been young and made great contributions to our current situation, and can continue to benefit communities and their families by doing chores. The youngster, shouldering more responsibilities for the development, should also be cherished and granted more support.
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看了小编以上的范文分享,结合两个小技巧,大家掌握雅思写作的要点了吗?

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