哪些原因使你的托福写作分不高

内容：　　那么是什么原因拖了托福写作的后腿呢？

　　名词单复数错误：
　　1.A great many student would benefit from the investment on improving schol.
　　2.Few parent would like to permit their child to make any mistake.
　　3.Environmental problem are beyond the ability of individual.
　　修正：以上三句话都有相同的错误，本来应该是复数的名词写成了单数。

　　主谓不一致错误：
　　1.A quantity of people concerns about how to solve the severe problem of air contamination.
　　2.Restricted by methods, students has to be influenced by their teachers, even though the teachers are not outstanding.
　　修正：中文里的谓语动词不会有任何变化，但是英语不一样，谓语动词要根据主语的单复数情况发生变化。上面两个句子中的主语是复述，谓语动词却用了单数，这是错误的。
　　时态错误：
　　1.In the past, the major way for young people to learn knowledge is attending classes.
　　2.When I study in college, I have no choice but to spend more than 10 hours a day on academic study.
　　修正：英语还有一个特点，就是时态。过去时、现在时、将来时等，各种时态形式都要掌握，上面两个橘子把过去时的动词写成了一般现在时。
　　词性误用：
　　1.No one can negative the importance of money.
　　2.Family members play significance role in our journey s of success.
　　修正：托福考生最容易犯的就是词性误用。英语单词名词形式、形容词形式、副词形式很相近，如果对语法或单词掌握不深，很容易出错。
　　there be 句型误用：
　　1.There are a great many parents require their children to learning music and art since they are at the age of five.
　　2.There are a large number of students spend more than ten hours a day on learning English in CAU.
　　修正：there be句型是写作最常用的句型，但是很多考生没有真的掌握。there be后面跟的一定是-ing形式。

　　以上这些是在托福写作时经常会犯的错误，希望同学们要牢牢记住，考试时不要再犯。